I'm doing NaNoWriMo.
Today you're getting an excerpt. Not really edited, but what of the stuff I put up here is?
Yes, Alex is autistic. No, she doesn't know she's autistic. No, she's never going to find out.
This isn't where the story actually starts, but it was the first thing written- I'm not actually writing in order, and it seems like Alex and Kaili are each getting about a books worth of stuff before they meet.
Today you're getting an excerpt. Not really edited, but what of the stuff I put up here is?
Yes, Alex is autistic. No, she doesn't know she's autistic. No, she's never going to find out.
This isn't where the story actually starts, but it was the first thing written- I'm not actually writing in order, and it seems like Alex and Kaili are each getting about a books worth of stuff before they meet.
Alex leaned against the palace wall, absently gliding her fingers
against the smoothness of the marble, and waited, ignoring the
servants bustle as they moved tables and hung banners outside. She
was hours early for the tournament sign-up, which would not open
until noon: she preferred to avoid the explanations her mother would
demand if she left dressed as a boy with her breasts bound, carrying
the sword she wasn't supposed to have, with her hair in a style used
by long-haired young men instead of the proper ladies bun she hated
spending her time on. She also preferred not to be late or poorly
dressed for the banquet that evening. “I spent my afternoon signing
up for a tournament” would get her in more trouble than no
explanation at all. So she made sure to be early.
It paid off. She was the first to sign up, which meant she was the
first to leave. On her way out, she noticed Jasson entering the
courtyard. She hoped he didn't recognize her. That was one headache
she didn't need.
Then Alex remembered. She'd planned well for getting out of
her room for sign-ups, rising well before dawn. But how was she going
to get back in? She couldn't exactly walk in with her hair
down and her breasts bound, no more than she could walk in with her
sword out. Not with her parents awake, which they would be by now.
With luck, they wouldn't be worrying about where she was yet. They
knew her habit of walking in the mornings at home.
She ran towards Jasson's rooms, across the palace- she'd seen him
enter the line to sign up for the tourney, and that meant he wasn't
in his rooms. Then she stopped. She had no way to get into his rooms.
She looked around: she stood in the gardens, and the winter weather
meant few people lingered. Alex stepped off the path and behind some
bushes, hoping the cold would last until she could return. She didn't
want anyone lingering long enough to notice her things. She put her
sword, dagger, and shirt into her pack, pulled out the short dress
she had thought to bring, closed the bag, and slid it under the
largest of the bushes, cursing as she discovered the hard way that
this bush had thorns. She looked at her arms- there were several
lines where her skin was lighter than it should be from the
scratches, but no blood. With luck, the scratches would fade before a
maid noticed, or worse, her mother.
Tom here.
ReplyDeleteGreat story! :) Kind of bare bones, the way I think, too. I want to hear more. Is Alex stimming when her fingers glide? Why does she want to fight in a tourney? If she's so concerned about scratches, I don't see how she is realistic about fighting in a tourney. Surely her mother would notice wounds. Sorry if I'm too picky, but you know how it is. :) At least I'm engaged in the story!
Changing topics. Is there any site that has info for Boomers who belatedly realize that they have ASD (or however you want to phrase it)?